Reflection 1.2

One thing that came up the most in my feedback earlier was my introduction. My group stated that it was a little confusing and unclear of what my point was. While going over my draft to create my second draft, my introduction was my main focus. Getting that down pact would create the building blocks for the rest of my paper, an important aspect to my paper. From there I also took in one feedback from a group member who stated that I should try to make my transitions flow better. I knew what I had to do, but I feel as if I didn't get enough specifics such as certain phrases that might have been confusing or awkward. In order to have gone further in my paper I went to the Writting Center in Huffman Hall and asked on friend who is a teaching major, to critique my paper. From there I got feedback which helped me more. I personally would rather have someone "tear" my paper apart in giving feedback rather than say its good.