I like that people see my essay well. I would however like more feedback so I can improve it more. Ashley did say that I should reword my introduction so that is something that I can work on. I don't take compliments as well as I do with critiques. I can't always see what is wrong so I rely on others to help out, making Ashley’s comment very useful to me so that I can better my essay. My process is mind-boggling. I keep going back and forth wondering if I should switch this sentence or move the first paragraph to the second. In my next draft I hope make my introduction captivating and organized so that the reader is intrigued and wants to continue reading. Along with the introduction, I was to make my evidence along with the rebuttal more persuasive so that the reader can think, “She is right!”.
Thursday, February 11, 2010
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