Reflection 1.3

For this last part of my essay I had to do more of my own thinking. It was a little difficult to find my "voice" in the paper that opposed some of the things that the editorial was spectulating. Overall I wouldn't say that this paper was enjoyable to write, but more of something that was important and needed to be stated. It is a little harder for me to tell an audience was I think or feel in writting as opposed to what I used to concentrate more in, art. Images help express what I believe, think or feel. Maybe in my next essay I can use the idea that was stated in class which is to have a picture with the essay to better clarify what my central idea is. The feedback from my group could be better. I didn't get enough critques to better my paper, the most that was stated was for my introduction to be clearer.